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#716569 - 11/12/2003 11:40 PM new tune needs feedback  
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hi guys and girls

i have made a new tune and would lvoe to knwo what u think (please no slagging off im new to this)

i dont knwo what category it comes under http://www.soundclick.com/util/Streamm3u.m3u?ID=683524&q=hi << this is the link

can u please send all feedback to missxs@missxs.co.uk with teh heading "xs denied feedback"

thank you for your time

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#716570 - 11/13/2003 04:13 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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Is this dial up or broadband link? Can u give ur soundclick addy and ill go into it and get the right one for what i need and will listen to it!! Also u need to be registered to soundclick (well did need to be) as far as im aware so not many people on here will be, i am so if u give me the addy and ill see what i think

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#716571 - 11/13/2003 11:54 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: Claire DC]  
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Is this dial up or broadband link? Can u give ur soundclick addy and ill go into it and get the right one for what i need and will listen to it!! Also u need to be registered to soundclick (well did need to be) as far as im aware so not many people on here will be, i am so if u give me the addy and ill see what i think



I just entered http://www.soundclick.com/missxs into my IE browser at a complete guess and it worked so try that :-)

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#716572 - 11/13/2003 12:35 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: Chris_Hutchinson]  
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Is this dial up or broadband link? Can u give ur soundclick addy and ill go into it and get the right one for what i need and will listen to it!! Also u need to be registered to soundclick (well did need to be) as far as im aware so not many people on here will be, i am so if u give me the addy and ill see what i think



I just entered http://www.soundclick.com/missxs into my IE browser at a complete guess and it worked so try that :-)



Thanks babe.. dunno why i didnt try myself but thenit was late

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#716573 - 11/13/2003 04:39 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: Claire DC]  
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its the XS denied tune - the longest one on there

sorry my link was a bit messed up im sorting it now but yeh i can put www.soundclick.com/missxs and get to my page

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#716574 - 11/13/2003 08:15 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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Will listen and make comment a bit later when i have a lil more time on my hands hun!!

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#716575 - 11/14/2003 02:58 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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just listened to XS Denied and comments: (sorry if u think i'm a bit harsh but it may help u)

bit simple, boring and generally isn't very busy as i would put it, ie hardly nething going on in the track in the background or foreground.

Having said that its probably because u haven't been producing for long. Keep at it and u will get better with time.

Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.

And an actual comment on the track, one of the notes before kick comes in is out of key or something and just sounds wrong, can't remember how far in it was

Just listened to Riding the Ocean and its better, less simple than denied but again lacks background stuff and generally doesn't sound professional. This will get better with practice.

And revenge: all similar comments, too simple and not enough going on to really make it worth playing out or sending to a record company.

If u wanna know what i mean by busy listen to nething by nick sentience as he does a lot of background stuff in his productions.

Don't be put off by my negative comments but just practice practice practice and eventually it may come together.

Again sorry for being harsh but it will help you.

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#716576 - 11/14/2003 11:01 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: benrostwood]  
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Listening to Khemikal Imbalanc...

at the end of the day if you ask for an opinion you will get it good or bad.

you cant say listen to my tune only comment if you really like it.

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#716577 - 11/14/2003 11:08 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: Jay]  
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Listening to Khemikal Imbalanc...

i just listened to it and tbh i liked the break and the tune for like the first 15 seconds and then it all gets a bit offkey after that.

some good elements in it though if its thrown together properly.

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#716578 - 11/14/2003 01:30 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: benrostwood]  
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just listened to XS Denied and comments: (sorry if u think i'm a bit harsh but it may help u)

bit simple, boring and generally isn't very busy as i would put it, ie hardly nething going on in the track in the background or foreground.

Having said that its probably because u haven't been producing for long. Keep at it and u will get better with time.

Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.

And an actual comment on the track, one of the notes before kick comes in is out of key or something and just sounds wrong, can't remember how far in it was

Just listened to Riding the Ocean and its better, less simple than denied but again lacks background stuff and generally doesn't sound professional. This will get better with practice.

And revenge: all similar comments, too simple and not enough going on to really make it worth playing out or sending to a record company.

If u wanna know what i mean by busy listen to nething by nick sentience as he does a lot of background stuff in his productions.

Don't be put off by my negative comments but just practice practice practice and eventually it may come together.

Again sorry for being harsh but it will help you.



ta for all that :D thank you for taking time to listen to my tracks :D yeh im new and i only use fruity so im still learning thats why i thought posting about it on here would get responses like urs so i can improve :D so ur not being harsh mate ur being helpful :D

thanx again :D

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#716579 - 11/14/2003 05:29 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: benrostwood]  
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Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.


It makes no difference what program you use! Even if you use Protools, you tune is only as good as your samples / experience / creativity!

#716580 - 11/14/2003 07:00 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: liquideyes]  
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second that.

I have a mate you who uses fruity alone and his productions sound just as good as another mate of mine who uses cubase and a full studio set up.

Creativity/knowledge is the key.

I havent had time to listen yet MsXS but I will. Take the comments on board and keep at it.

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#716581 - 11/15/2003 12:15 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: LiamStyles]  
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i quite like it.

its very minimal - reminds me of psytrance - this track has alot of potential.

I like the drone bassline - the kick bass could be with being alot harder but keep it at the depth it is - nice and dark!

melody is very basic and not orginal however you could have alot of fun wit this melody.

if its alright with you - i'd like to experiment with what i;ve heard and send you a clip of some ideas you could implentment into your track - also i have alot of sample cd's - so if you want some samples PM me your addy and i'll send um up to ya

i'll write a proper full review abit later - doing college work atm

#716582 - 11/15/2003 05:26 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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My main criticisms are:

* Try to make some better percussion. The drums are all a bit "Casio keyboard" / Rebirth-esque.
* The lead synth sound is a bit naff, and isn't very rhythmically interesting (most of the notes are on the beat). Try making it a bit more syncopated and make some more interesting sounds with a soft synth or something.
* You need a bit more variation. There are not enough different ideas in the track to keep it interesting for the whole duration of the song.

Hope this is helpful.

#716583 - 11/17/2003 12:04 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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it dont work

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#716584 - 11/18/2003 01:08 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: liquideyes]  
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Also wot program are u using as it doesn't sound like a very good one. May be just me tho.


It makes no difference what program you use! Even if you use Protools, you tune is only as good as your samples / experience / creativity!



actually if u have the cheap version of making waves it makes a lot of difference as its a shit program and u can't make nething half decent on it

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#716585 - 11/18/2003 01:14 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: benrostwood]  
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Okay, obviously your program has to be reasonably good. I mean, Microsoft Word isn't going to suffice...

But I think that saying "sounds like you used a crap program to make the tune" is misleading. Getting a better program won't automatically make your tunes better!

#716586 - 11/19/2003 04:18 AM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: liquideyes]  
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Okay, obviously your program has to be reasonably good. I mean, Microsoft Word isn't going to suffice...

But I think that saying "sounds like you used a crap program to make the tune" is misleading. Getting a better program won't automatically make your tunes better!



Agreed

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#716587 - 12/02/2003 06:48 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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Miss XS - i finished my edit of this choon - i'll send it up with the sample cd's - might give you some ideas

#716588 - 12/03/2003 01:47 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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now then i am sorry it needs alot of work
that is my honest opinion

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#716589 - 12/03/2003 01:59 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: Elevation]  
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agreed matey - but she has alot of good ideas with the choon - it needs to be harder and darker imo

#716590 - 12/03/2003 03:49 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: DJ_Elemental]  
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Listening to Khemikal Imbalanc...
it needs to be better and gooder imo


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#716591 - 12/03/2003 06:13 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: Jay]  
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it needs to be better and gooder imo





lol, nice and constructive criticism there jay, hehe

anyway i've not been able to have a listen yet but i will do as soon as i get a minute

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#716592 - 12/21/2003 07:44 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: DJ_Elemental]  
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hiya i havent listened to it yet and Im sure when i do get round to it, it will takes days to download lol. All cus of my shite connection (not on broadband).
I will do soon tho and help you out, give advice n stuff.
I use cubase n sound forge at the moment, dont rate my tracks really i still need a lot of work -

Which reminds me, I will be sending them off to you soon - DJ Elemental



(this post hasnt been of use at all has it?) ah well.

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#716593 - 12/23/2003 06:49 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missnaughtydj]  
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Which reminds me, I will be sending them off to you soon - DJ Elemental





- lookin forward to hearing them!

#716594 - 12/23/2003 07:09 PM Re: new tune needs feedback [Re: missxs]  
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it needs a lot of work..its very sparse, but as elemental said, theres some ok idea's in there. dunno what style youd call it tho cos its kinda old detoit techno-esque sounding to me..

keep it up tho.. get used to what functions whatever the prog u are using has, and try ans spice it up a bit


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